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"Its my right" - First Mix (Criticism welcome)
#1
Hey people,

so this is my first mix of "Its my right". Take a listen and tell me what you think Big Grin


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#2
Hi

well done.
For my taste, the overall stereo guitares are a bit loud while lead is singing or the effect on the voice is bringing it a little less forward, the rhythm guitare in the guitare's solo is too. By bringing them down, perhaps the voice will pop up and so the guitare solo.
why not have some more dynamics (?nuances in french) between the different parts of the song (less comp ?) and more air on the drums and guitares.
I like the guitare's pan & sound, drums and bass are great too. Very effective.

have a nice day

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#3
Thank you very much for the feedback Smile

I adjusted the Rythm and Stereo Guitars to bring them down during the vocal and solo. And added a bit of "air" (10k-20k) to the Guitar Bus. I also put a bit more verb on Guitars and Drums to push them back in the mix and give the pretty dry vocal an upfront role.

Futhermore I did some slight automation of the Masterfader (Verses: -3, Choruses: -1.5, Last Chorus: 0) to improve the dynamics, the max GR on the Limiter is now at around 3db.


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#4
hi,

this kind of tune are not easy!
I don't think, if I may, it needed reverb but automation. The reverb makes me feel like you blurred you're overall mix that was fine.
when I told you to have more dynamics, I didn't mean with the master fader but to have for exemple less bass in the first verse and bit more in the the second (just few db)to have the same as when you play (as musician) in live: make room for the new comer.( i know it's rock stuff and the amps must have the volume at 11 !) it should bring movement between the different parts. I'm not a specialist with this kind of music.

as you said somewhere else it's a matter of taste.
I hope, you won't be too disappointed. Just trying to help.

have a good night (in here it is night!)




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#5
Hey man thanks for the comment recently, i felt i wanted to comment this mix as well cuz u commented mine Wink haha no but i think this is a good mix, Im kind of a vocal up guy, thats the only thing and also a bit more punch in the snare is my subjective criticism, other then that good work Smile. You have a good sense of mixing. But actually when listening back the vocals seems nice in level!
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