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James May: 'Eliza Jane'
#1
Lovely song .
Here is version 1

version 2 Didn't want to mute the mandolin , put it further back in the room along withe the backing vocals and organ ,work in progress to make the sense of space more believable !

Cheers Big Grin


.mp3    Eliza Jane V1.mp3 --  (Download: 11.91 MB)


.mp3    Eliza Jane V2.mp3 --  (Download: 11.91 MB)



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#2
Lovely mix and song, Don! The only thing I missed was a little bit warmth in the guitars in the intro. In the rest of the song, I think they're ok because then they would be interfering with the vocals and other instruments, so with a little of automated EQ, you can fix that minor issue... Well done! Smile
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#3
(02-04-2017, 11:33 AM)juanjose1967 Wrote: Lovely mix and song, Don! The only thing I missed was a little bit warmth in the guitars in the intro. In the rest of the song, I think they're ok because then they would be interfering with the vocals and other instruments, so with a little of automated EQ, you can fix that minor issue... Well done! Smile

Thanks for having a listen , listening back after your comments will try the automated eq trick great idea.
Thanks Big Grin.

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#4
Great intimate sound! I'm sensing some experimentation with sat/dist/clipping. The overall tone might be a bit middle rangish - nothing little abusive maul-the-band compression in the master could't take care of. Once again you've nailed it. ^_^
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(04-04-2017, 03:31 AM)kapu Wrote: Great intimate sound! I'm sensing some experimentation with sat/dist/clipping. The overall tone might be a bit middle rangish - nothing little abusive maul-the-band compression in the master could't take care of. Once again you've nailed it. ^_^

You are right ,I added maserati grp plugin to the master bus which is enhansing some subtle distortion on the multitracks .

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#6
Balances just perfect to me. Internally pretty coherent mix.

I agree with Kapu’s comment about mid-ranginess.

Is there in vox a bit too much saturation? Personnally I’d like to hear a bit fuller or "selling" vox in this song, for this feels like "man with a voice" recording.

Tremolo effect with mandolin (for example around 1:08) could be a bit softer. Now it takes a focus away from vox.
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#7
(08-04-2017, 08:08 AM)Olli H Wrote: Balances just perfect to me. Internally pretty coherent mix.

I agree with Kapu’s comment about mid-ranginess.

Is there in vox a bit too much saturation? Personnally I’d like to hear a bit fuller or "selling" vox in this song, for this feels like "man with a voice" recording.

Tremolo effect with mandolin (for example around 1:08) could be a bit softer. Now it takes a focus away from vox.
Thanks for having a listen olli , listening again after hearing your mixes ,i definitely rolled off too much bottom end on the vox .
version 2 coming soon based on your feedback !

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#8
It sounds good, but maybe automate the mandolin. It's bit much at times.
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#9
(10-04-2017, 01:21 AM)Damian Oakes Wrote: It sounds good, but maybe automate the mandolin. It's bit much at times.

Thanks for having a listen ,
yes i agree and also have to use to mute button more.

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#10
The drums lock the rhythm in nicely. Well played.Big Grin
You could try and side chain the mandolin around the vocal with a big RMS setting on a compressor. This approach works well and ducks quite naturally.

Dave
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