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Still Flyin, Effinjerk Mix
#1
Hi there,
I really enjoyed this song, but the bass and vocals in particular gave me some trouble. There was an annoying hum in the bass when you added any type of drive and the vocal parts were more of an annoyance in organizing then anything else. I would love any feedback, and thanks in advance!


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#2
Hey there.
Good job on the mix, especially the vocals.
I noticed a some things that I want to point out:
- The Bass is a bit to harsh in the top end or cuts just a bit to much
- The kick is a little "annoying" in the top
- I think the snare is a bit too loud and dry
- That phasing effect that starts before the screaming is a great idea but a bit too up front
- your clean guitars aren't properly aligned
- during the calm parts, lower the volume of the drums it sounds better and more dynamic and gives the listener a bit of breathing room

Overall, still a good mix, though.
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#3
(26-01-2017, 08:36 PM)BlondPanda Wrote: Hey there.
Good job on the mix, especially the vocals.
I noticed a some things that I want to point out:
- The Bass is a bit to harsh in the top end or cuts just a bit to much
- The kick is a little "annoying" in the top
- I think the snare is a bit too loud and dry
- That phasing effect that starts before the screaming is a great idea but a bit too up front
- your clean guitars aren't properly aligned
- during the calm parts, lower the volume of the drums it sounds better and more dynamic and gives the listener a bit of breathing room

Overall, still a good mix, though.
Hey BlondPanda,
Thanks for the crit, coming back to this song after few weeks, I completely agree with all your points. Especially the bass, I had the hardest time with it and sounds like I over did it!
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