and this is my mix

[leohide]

Few hours, give me an opinion, what' s good? what' s wrong? thank you for listening and maybe more.

[Dags]

Hiya and welcome leohide

The track is well balanced, though the kick is getting lost during the 'halleluja' section and the heavy section around the 4 minute mark - it could be just the guitars masking the kick through volume.
Maybe taking them down a little in volume (and the lead guitar to bring it back to the same relative level) will be enough to get the drums peeking through.
Interesting use of echo on the verse vocals as well.

Well done!
Dags

[leohide]

thanks you! You' re right, Finally I' m absolutely not satisfied to my mix and will try an other one approaches.