16-11-2016, 12:16 PM
Pretty strong mix Dave!
Only minor points:
The chorus guitars are a bit too loud when you compare them to the vocals. The latter could be brought up a bit, especially in the chorus.
Choir vocals feel a bit too upfront.
Tonally the lead vocal feels a bit midrangy, maybe cut a little bit around 500 to 600 Hz, that could open it up more?
The same applies to the chorus guitar on the left i think.
Since i noticed your mix is quite low in volume i guess you didn´t do a lot of "mastering" or mix bus processing. So a lot of the points above could be addressed in a final mastering step i guess. Here the low end of the mix could also be empasized a tiny bit more in my opinion.
But as always all of these thoughts are highly subjective, hope you can utilize some of them...
Cheers,
Herb
Only minor points:
The chorus guitars are a bit too loud when you compare them to the vocals. The latter could be brought up a bit, especially in the chorus.
Choir vocals feel a bit too upfront.
Tonally the lead vocal feels a bit midrangy, maybe cut a little bit around 500 to 600 Hz, that could open it up more?
The same applies to the chorus guitar on the left i think.
Since i noticed your mix is quite low in volume i guess you didn´t do a lot of "mastering" or mix bus processing. So a lot of the points above could be addressed in a final mastering step i guess. Here the low end of the mix could also be empasized a tiny bit more in my opinion.
But as always all of these thoughts are highly subjective, hope you can utilize some of them...
Cheers,
Herb