Please help/critique... Atrophy

[davidpaulpaige]

I am an amateur but I really love mixing. At some level I feel like I am a kid again, playing with the 31 band EQ in my grandfathers truck.
Feel free to comment and critique. I feel like I am in a vacuum trying to learn how to mix in a tin can.
I liked this song's vibe and tried to be creative. The mid range smear is probably the iTunes mp3 conversion. What should I do?

[thedon]

Hi David

your not alone i am also an amateur and also love mixing and listening to other mixes.
You have done a good job ,maybe the synth that comes in at 3.22 could come down a touch.

[mik123]

Hi David

your not alone i am also an amateur and also love mixing and listening to other mixes.
You have done a good job ,maybe the synth that comes in at 3.22 could come down a touch.

I agree!