Yo Spandexcore!
Your new mix sounds much better than the first one! Cool to see your improvements!
Here are a few things i thought of listening to your mix.
Bass is a little loud and has some distortion that i don't like. It's great to use dist on bass but IMO this is too much. Might also cut some mids from bass.
Snare has no body and no punch. I would cut some mids from it and bring back the 150-200hz that i think you've cut. Also check phase with the OH.
Kick need more separation from bass, it's barely heard. Try boosting kick at somewhere around 50-100 hz, see where it sounds best, and then cut the bass in the same place. Might also help to add a multiband compressor and sidechain bass to the kick. A boost at 2,5 - 6k might also help it cut through.
Backing vocals are too loud and too muddy.
Vocals sound good, i would just cut some mids from them.
Guitars sound really good!