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PatrickTalbot_UpperHand_Yuri Semenov -mix
#1
Nice song, as always!


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#2
Not bad Yuri. I still think there's room for improvements.
- the mix overall is rather dark, the drums are rather subdued, and I feel that there's some muddiness in the 300-500hz that unfortunately dominates.
- the acoustic could use some low-shelf/high pass, it's rather boomy ATM.
- the vocal sounds a bit thin and it seems you've enhanced some bad frequencies, it sounds rather muffled and nasally (which is my voice, I reckon, but could be EQ-ed better, I think).
- I miss a sense of space overall, the mix sounds a bit congested (probably because of the dominance of the muddy 300-500hz region?)
- the ending is supposed to be a fade out, not end abruptly.
That's all I can think of. Needs a little more work, IMHO. Keep it up! Smile
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#3
Lovely Mix Yuri I enjoyed listening every bit of it
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