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Forkupines - Sleep By The Fire, Bloom In Water
#1
Hi, this is my first submission and I would appreciate any critiques, pointers, advice, any thing at all!!


.mp3    sleepbythefire.mp3 --  (Download: 7.56 MB)


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#2
Hey hecdav,

I think your mix sounds a bit heavily mid-scooped, there's little life in it. But it's really decent for a first contribution!
I think if you let it breath a little more it will be fine.
One more thing, watch your snare and drum bus compressors. Seems like the cymbals jump up every time the snare is being hit. Just a matter of adjustment Smile

Cheers!
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#3
Wurstdrummer,

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen to my mix and responding. Making the adjustments!!

Cheers!
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#4
Updated submission. Looking forward to any and all critiques.


.mp3    Sleep By The Fire, Bloom In Water.mp3 --  (Download: 7.56 MB)


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#5
Nice balance across the top end. Good mix between synth and guitars in choruses. I think the lo-end elements need quite a bit more level and punch. Enjoyed listeningSmile
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