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Neon Hornet: 'Take It off'
#11
(11-11-2015, 05:28 PM)Olli H Wrote: I like the overall sound.
I agree with DLR, vox feels a little thin.
Interesting that you decided to put guitars to mono in the middle. Here and there I would like to hear the riff a little better. But not all the time Smile

FIrst guitars solo sound is great, but the second one you have forgotten totally.
Hi Olli
Will check what happened to the second guitar solo:Blush
I will have another try using appropriate reference material for this genre.
Thanks Big Grin

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#12
Don at 2:36 there was a slight glitch in the song (vocal?), at the start of the first chorus the BV's were present then were missing, but in the second chorus they were absent?. Then BV's were very dominant at 3:40. Consistency is the key, maybe ? I feel your mix could benefit from this philosophy. cheers
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#13
(16-12-2015, 10:55 AM)Dave Boogie Wrote: Don at 2:36 there was a slight glitch in the song (vocal?), at the start of the first chorus the BV's were present then were missing, but in the second chorus they were absent?. Then BV's were very dominant at 3:40. Consistency is the key, maybe ? I feel your mix could benefit from this philosophy. cheers
Hey Dave ,
Ah yes It's great to have a second pair of ears ,listening back I totally missed the glitch and Bv Inconsistencies until you pointed them out will try to sort out in next version.
Cheers Don Big Grin

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#14
Hi Don nice mix slightly thin on vocals as you already know but still good.
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(16-12-2015, 07:49 PM)Cudjoe Wrote: Hi Don nice mix slightly thin on vocals as you already know but still good.

cheers for the feedback Big Grin

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#16
Wash, rinse and repeat. Vox. About my only compaint! The rest sounds strong, man.

Draper
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#17
(21-12-2015, 08:28 PM)loweche6 Wrote: Wash, rinse and repeat. Vox. About my only compaint! The rest sounds strong, man.

Draper
Cheers Draper Big Grin


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#18
Great job on the drums! The definitely carry the groove

the vocals sound honky - too much in the 1k range?
the guitars arent as up front as i would like in rock song - they are ok during the verses, but other places they are definitely lacking, try using some automation to get them to really pop at the right places

i think you could compress the bass a bit more or do some automation, notes get lost every now and then

nice work overall!
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(29-12-2015, 02:06 AM)JClean17 Wrote: Great job on the drums! The definitely carry the groove

the vocals sound honky - too much in the 1k range?
the guitars arent as up front as i would like in rock song - they are ok during the verses, but other places they are definitely lacking, try using some automation to get them to really pop at the right places

i think you could compress the bass a bit more or do some automation, notes get lost every now and then

nice work overall!

Thanks for the feedback ,will sort out the issues you mentioned in version 2
Cheers Big Grin

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