A lot of problems with this recording, mainly in the drums area. A lot of bleeding, some phasing problems. Didn't added anything to the drums (maybe I should?). For the guitar I used all the tracks recorded and blended them, same for bass line. For the voice I kept two tracks, to make it sound bigger. A lot of work and I don't know if I succeeded. You tell me.
Your work shows. There is some nice polish on this but then there is the editing glitch on the last vocal line. Doesn't match the rest of the quality of the mix and the space you created which is very good. I also really like your cymbals.
Thank you for your words. About that glitch, I think it was late at night...
Here is another version, with some automation on reverb and delay. I hope I didn't miss something.