Piece of me. First mix

[Vila_98]

This is my first serious mix. Please tell me if it's okay

[Blitzzz]

If you want feedback it's a very good idea to give feedback to other mixes/mixers on this forum first. You don't have to mix for the last twenty years to write down what you think and feel and it only takes a couple of minutes. Your chances will be much higher that someone else will take the time to listen to your stuff too.

[Reaper]

I like the idea of the "intro"
But I think the instrumental is to quiet and to much compression on it.
A bit less reverb on the vocals could be better. But i like it at the slower part.
Bass Guitar is much louder the the Kick. Couldn't really hear the Kick. Kick should be louder and more attack (maybe at 5-8khz)

Sry for my bad english. Good luck