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The Elephant
#1
Great track

Enjoyed putting this first mix together


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#2
Personally, the verses seems a little too mono for me - makes the drums stick out as the only thing doing anything stereo. Other than that, great job! Smile
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#3
(02-02-2020, 08:19 PM)whiteditto Wrote: Personally, the verses seems a little too mono for me - makes the drums stick out as the only thing doing anything stereo. Other than that, great job! Smile

Thanks so much for the feedback i have provided a revised v2 mix



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#4
Cool mix! Balance sounds nice. Bass could be rid of of the honkines thats cuts through a mix too much in my opinion. Transition sounds nice. Very natural dynamic,. Good Job.
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#5
Good bass guitar treatment and balance. The lead vocal in the second verse gets lost a bit.
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#6
thanks so much for the feedback guys

i have hopefully tamed the honkey-ness in the bass sound with this version



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#7
Hey TheBouff,

Interesting mix, I like it.

Balance is good.
I like the drum space.
Something wonky in the choruses

Cheers! Smile
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#8
(07-02-2020, 05:13 PM)letifer85 Wrote: Hey TheBouff,

Interesting mix, I like it.

Balance is good.
I like the drum space.
Something wonky in the choruses

Cheers! Smile

thanks so much for the feedback, i think i had some ugly build-up at about 500

Submitting mix v4



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#9
I listened to version 4.

- The delay on the verse guitar is a bit distracting. Verse guitar is also a bit too harsh
- The mix in general is a bit boxy
- Verse vocal seems a bit too ‘tele’ sounding, unless that’s what you went for
- Kick is a bit boxy
- Chorus vocals aren’t bright enough

Good luck!
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