I like it. Nice balance, nice tone. I think the main changes of arrangement are nicely present in your mix.
Some minor ideas to test if plan to do second version:
- vocal sound is nice but (maybe) sounds too dark when I listen at low volume. The trick could be slighty down the bass side of vocals and turn volume 1-2 dB up. Or carve some room in the mid range in the band buss for vocals.
- hi-hats could be opened just a little bit, but not much to preserve the old sound.