I like your vocal reverb, but the vocal is a wee bit wet relative to the rest of the mix. You could turn it down, or you could give the other instruments a bit more to improve the overall depth illusion.
The vocal sounds really, super controlled dynamically. It's not bad SONICALLY, but I feel it could be improved with a bit more dynamics for emotion. Maybe back off on the compression and do a bit of automation to keep the vocal in balance.
There's some low frequency garbage coming from a drum (I think?) in the left channel that's interfering with the bass on occasion. Your balance would come together more easily and your mix will translate better if you keep your side channels a bit cleaner in the low end department.
Overall, though, some nice sounds here. I especially like where you're going with the ambience.
Hi I actually like the reverb on the vox track in your first version very much
On the original track of the tom there is a nasty resonance, you can filter it away with a negative notch filter at 133.8 Hz and a Q between 8 and 9. This will do a lot of good.
I attached a picture of the filter.
In this song I personally like to emphasize the rim click.
Try my versions of this song, hope it can inspire you
21-04-2016, 10:12 PM (This post was last modified: 21-04-2016, 10:15 PM by Sobbeggi.)
Came back to this song today. I have been revising my sonic preferences, opting away from that harsh upper mids I've been loving so much until now. This mix is a totally new approach, leaning towards the warmer frequencies and using compressors in a more musical way to create depth.
But I am stuck between loving this sound and finding it not open enough.