The noise removed at the start and finish would be good,i like the vocals the way they sit together.
I think the acoustic is a bit too wet but that might be just me,also i think the acoustic could have
a bit more bottom end not too much
Yeah, listening back I feel it was a bit too wet with reverb. My ears must have become immune to it during the mix. I'll try and improve it and post another.
What kills mixing that song also is the guitar track over the vocals,why they do this then wonder why
they cant get a great mix ,you see it time and time again.
The lead vocal is too loud IMO. It also needs some volume riding as there are spots where the vocal really stick out a lot and hurts my ears. I know the recording isn't perfect, but maybe you can get rid of the nasal vocal sound some more.
I don't really hear much of the backup vocal, but I think that's primarily caused by the lead vocal.