06-02-2015, 06:31 PM
Thanks for the kind words Cudjoe, glad you like the songs! 
Some things I like in your mix are: the bass treatment, good presence on that, it's driving the song so it has to be there... the vocal is sounding fine as well, not too sibilant but not muffled either, the horns are nice too, and the snare is sounding great.
The rhodes could have a bit more definition, it's a bit muddy right now, I'd try to cut some of the low-mids and add some air to it.
The kick is huge though and taking a lot of headroom and muddying up everything when it comes.
The first guitar that acts as counterpoint to the vocal is a bit loud. And the lead guitar is definitely too loud. I would review the levels of the guitars in general in your mix.
Good first attempt though. Keep it up!
Some things I like in your mix are: the bass treatment, good presence on that, it's driving the song so it has to be there... the vocal is sounding fine as well, not too sibilant but not muffled either, the horns are nice too, and the snare is sounding great.
The rhodes could have a bit more definition, it's a bit muddy right now, I'd try to cut some of the low-mids and add some air to it.
The kick is huge though and taking a lot of headroom and muddying up everything when it comes.
The first guitar that acts as counterpoint to the vocal is a bit loud. And the lead guitar is definitely too loud. I would review the levels of the guitars in general in your mix.
Good first attempt though. Keep it up!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here