Simplemachine Ingloria

[Universe Man]

hi there this is my version of this full of emotions crazy good song:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NTvl2Rx...share_link

I think it's mostly good, just 3 main suggestions.
I think the vocal compression is good in the intro and verse, but it is getting a bit stifled in the more dynamic parts. I would assume this is cause of some limiting on those parts. I suggest either riding the input level or just letting the vocal get a bit louder at those points.
I would also say the EQ on the strings should be a bit more balanced -- I usually don't even EQ strings in a decent recording -- just make sure they are balanced and not too focused on the upper mids.
Lastly, the drums are fairly dark, and I'd like more emphasis on the transients of the kick and snare.