(21-04-2023, 10:02 PM)A.sch3 Wrote: Hi !
Not a bad take, but let me point out some of the details that come to me :
- Vocal is too loud and take up the front in a distracting way
- Drumkit is too small and lack separation, deepen the kick, make that snare ring a bit more and boost the highs of the overheads
- Pan instruments full left/right, be bold, it usually works better than middleground panning.
The frequency balance seems to be a bit off by having the vocal too bright.
Good job on the vocal that are really low volume tho, it works ! It brings it right up in the face, that's what we want, but maybe not as loud.
Thanks for the feedback I agree with a lot of your assessment after stepping away from the track for several days and will probably be re-opening this session at some point to see what I can do.