SimpleMachine_InGloria_

[August]

Hey mate, this sounds pretty ok. I think its pretty clean and has a nice vibe to it.

Below are some opportunities to improve the mix ...

The strings sound like they are a bit "telephone" compared to everything else.
Vocals have a pretty distinct hiss to them (that fades out a little when the vocal compressor kicks in).
Kick has no real punch to it, and has less bass than the Toms and FX, which sounds a little unrealistic and distracting.
Vocals get crowded when everything comes in.

I hope these are helpful points! I'm here to help if you need it.

Thanks mate!