22-02-2024, 12:05 AM
Your mix sounds good overall. However, you could have "pushed" the general volume a little.
So, there is one thing that bothers me a lot: you absolutely do not respect the drummer's playing. Let's take the passage from 1'03 to 1'18: your snare only reproduces a simple attack whereas originally (check the track) there are "rolls" and "ghost notes". This is annoying in that it absolutely does not reproduce the original rhythm.
Pay attention to this kind of "detail". This can ruin a title...
So, there is one thing that bothers me a lot: you absolutely do not respect the drummer's playing. Let's take the passage from 1'03 to 1'18: your snare only reproduces a simple attack whereas originally (check the track) there are "rolls" and "ghost notes". This is annoying in that it absolutely does not reproduce the original rhythm.
Pay attention to this kind of "detail". This can ruin a title...