experimental mix

[ari5to5]

I thought the overall balance is good and everything was defined. there's a lot of distortion on the mix, makes me think your true peak volume is to loud before converting to mp3.
If that's the case bring the true peak down to -1 to -1.5 before going to mp3. also if you convert to 16bit first then to mp3 itll sound better then going from 24bit to mp3.
The esses are also a bit prominent.
Hope this helps.
Cheers!

thanks for your comment and the tips brother! I'll try that on the next one!