Hi thanks for the feedback on mine
listening to yours, generally it is very quiet, the vocal has a nice air to it but lacks presence as a focal point slightly, i like the idea of making the drop more impactful but the way you have done it just sounds like a volume change, it needs to be more subtle. also the balance of the synths goes a bit wayward at that point and the lower end is all a bit muddy and confused.
Generally good though mix wise, i would suggest bringing the lufs up above -14 and raise the peak so you can get a clearer picture of the lows, using a transparent limiter then adjust and remove it and see if it sounds better after, but you can afford to push it all alot more at the levels you have it
listening to yours, generally it is very quiet, the vocal has a nice air to it but lacks presence as a focal point slightly, i like the idea of making the drop more impactful but the way you have done it just sounds like a volume change, it needs to be more subtle. also the balance of the synths goes a bit wayward at that point and the lower end is all a bit muddy and confused.
Generally good though mix wise, i would suggest bringing the lufs up above -14 and raise the peak so you can get a clearer picture of the lows, using a transparent limiter then adjust and remove it and see if it sounds better after, but you can afford to push it all alot more at the levels you have it