The Updated - "New" - Joy of Release...

[Mixinthecloud]

I haven't listened to the preview mix so I can't say how structure has or was changed. As it is in this mix the structure and arrangement works well. Overall it sounds good. Tones and balances all fit together nicely. I think the vocal could come up a bit. It comes in a bit weak. I get that emotionally should have some vulnerability but I think the performance sells that. Maybe it's a bit too 'airy'. Maybe it's not the level but size. I'm not sure.

Anyhoo, that's how I hear it.

May I suggest turning up the volume? Bring the vocals to where you like them and listen to the mix from that context. Any better or different?

Thanks,
mITc