My mix of Sugar (Who would've guessed :p)

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very nice for a first time, ballanced well.
Vocals thas tends to go crazy in 2-4k u could eq or and some short of multiband compression to compress that area that is harsh,
for the second (masterd one) i didnt like it, for many reasons, mostly because of the ballance changed after those boosts.
cheers keep up