hey Andrea,
ok, I listened it quite often now... can't really tell what could be better... it's nearly perfect - from mastering view. But the arrangement I did could be a bit more spiced but, maybe
more effects and / or another instrument.
first it bothered me a little bit that you used only the unpitched version of the 'fx.wav' - but i think u mixed both together in later parts of the track?! I really liked that, so i would give it a bit more presence... maybe personal taste though
so very good job.
if you haven't listen to my version yet, here you go: http://soundcloud.com/c-fx/math3
but its uncomparable, mine sounds raw compared to yours
ok, I listened it quite often now... can't really tell what could be better... it's nearly perfect - from mastering view. But the arrangement I did could be a bit more spiced but, maybe
more effects and / or another instrument.
first it bothered me a little bit that you used only the unpitched version of the 'fx.wav' - but i think u mixed both together in later parts of the track?! I really liked that, so i would give it a bit more presence... maybe personal taste though
so very good job.
if you haven't listen to my version yet, here you go: http://soundcloud.com/c-fx/math3
but its uncomparable, mine sounds raw compared to yours