Hi Trev! I have some tips for you for this mix. Kick has alot of floppy midrange that doesn't really contribute to the mix, both around 700 - 1000 hz and some around 350-500. Snare also sounds floppy around the 400 area, could be better to try make it sound more "umpfhy" by cutting midrange and do small boost in lowend. Hats are super sizzely also crashes, the highend sorta has a "tssss" sound to it that i don't really like. Guitars are very balanced equed so nice tone there, what they lack a bit for my taste is to make them bit bigger with reverbs or delays, maybe only on certain sections if you want to go that far. Many that has mixed this song have had the bass very low in the mix and also i, maybe that could be something to look into to make the mix elivate. Other then that i think this is a good mix, lots of power. Toms after solo sound sick 
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