02-03-2014, 12:52 PM
You should work with balance of instruments.
For me there are some balance mistakes. (note that I've listened your mix in not pro environment)
Vocals are too much in front. Solo guitar should be louder. Can't tell you about bass with confidence (because of speakers), but I can't hear it at all.
Because of loud vocal mix seems to be "unglued".
Hope you'll take it as advice, but not like criticism.
For me there are some balance mistakes. (note that I've listened your mix in not pro environment)
Vocals are too much in front. Solo guitar should be louder. Can't tell you about bass with confidence (because of speakers), but I can't hear it at all.
Because of loud vocal mix seems to be "unglued".
Hope you'll take it as advice, but not like criticism.