25-02-2020, 07:36 PM
- Synth 1 could be loud if it wasn’t as harsh. It does not really work here unless maybe you process it differently with eq or saturation. I see it as more of a “guitar in front with supporting synth” type of song. That’s just me. It might also be better if you can control the swelling as well, because that distracted me a bit.
- Not sure how I feel about adding chorus effect to both the verse guitars and verse vocal. At least it kinda sounds that way. I would probably just add the effect on one or the other but not both.
- The breaths in the verse are way too harsh/loud. I would honestly just edit them out.
- I like the sound you got from the synth during verse 1.
- The kick could come up a tad
- Snare sounds a bit boxy. Maybe try to add a bit more air and low end punch. Bring it up a bit too.
You have some good stuff going on here, but I think that there are a couple fine tunes that need to be made in order to complete the puzzle.
Good luck!
- Not sure how I feel about adding chorus effect to both the verse guitars and verse vocal. At least it kinda sounds that way. I would probably just add the effect on one or the other but not both.
- The breaths in the verse are way too harsh/loud. I would honestly just edit them out.
- I like the sound you got from the synth during verse 1.
- The kick could come up a tad
- Snare sounds a bit boxy. Maybe try to add a bit more air and low end punch. Bring it up a bit too.
You have some good stuff going on here, but I think that there are a couple fine tunes that need to be made in order to complete the puzzle.
Good luck!