My first mixing attempts in Homestudio - Feedback welcome

[Dschaust]

Here is another version of my mix. After a few days i had the feeling that I had to change something.

- Phase issue at the Snare (top-Bottom)
- less reverb on the vocals
- saturation on some guitars
- i add a bit of automation
- reduce the output volume. The first mix was a way to loud
- add a fancy intro ;-)

Your Feedback is welcome!

EDIT:
I change the reverb one more time and the volume of the automation. But i think now it`s finished.