Broken Man (with added guitar solo)

[Jaybee]

Interesting use of the stereo field.
If you made the decisions (if it isnt a supplied drumloop panned allready) great work !
Cool drums
Im afraid the noise part of the drum tail mask the delicate synth piano parts, in 1st chorus that is, better in 2nd.
Give the keybord bits more volume first chorus ?
Great idea with a guitar solo, and a well choosen one too, so good it could have a little more tough Gary Moore bite to it, eq some more hard hi mid frequencies ?
Voices are a bit loud for my taste, but the lvl lead/bv are fine.
I like

Thank you. Apologies for the reply after ten years (lol  ) how time flies. Having just given this another listen I agree with all your points. I'd do it differently now, I think the Vox are a bit prominent. I think I have a better monitoring setup here now. BTW, It's a drum loop so not my choices for the panning etc but I think it works really well. 

Still really love this song and the voice. Great work from the artist.