My quick mix attempt

[loard15]

Vocal wise I could try and see how far I could add high end before the mix start loosing its balance, so far I kind of like the way they sit but yes, some high end might do the trick.

Finally I'm thinking perhaps the whole mix could take a touch of opening up but not by much as again I think it not being so bright and open does fit the mood it creates better

I agree with you 100%!