14-11-2012, 02:17 PM
Crumbs -- that's a different vision than mine, certainly! While artistic differences are, of course, welcome here 
I do have some reservations about your choices. The first thing is that it sounds a bit as if you're trying too hard -- everything seems quite heavily processed, where I know from experience of this multitrack that a lot of the sound comes about just from getting the phase-relationships sorted. The guitar in particular sounds very thin, and doesn't seem to support the vocals or fill out the choruses enough, so the vocals end up feeling a bit stranded.
The bass feels rather too subby as well -- it might as well not be there on my Avantone, which tells me that a lot listeners won't hear it at all.
I do have some reservations about your choices. The first thing is that it sounds a bit as if you're trying too hard -- everything seems quite heavily processed, where I know from experience of this multitrack that a lot of the sound comes about just from getting the phase-relationships sorted. The guitar in particular sounds very thin, and doesn't seem to support the vocals or fill out the choruses enough, so the vocals end up feeling a bit stranded.The bass feels rather too subby as well -- it might as well not be there on my Avantone, which tells me that a lot listeners won't hear it at all.