Your mix has lots of problems.No stereo image.drums are not punchy .bass guitar does not hear and kick is like absent.if you work hard you will do the great mix.dont give up.these things will develop you.people says bad thing about your mix but dont give up and you will achieve .ı believe. good luck.here is my mix .
https://soundcloud.com/muhammet-cev-k/al...-mixmaster
https://soundcloud.com/muhammet-cev-k/al...-mixmaster