A Place For Us mix

[LightYearRecords11]

As others have said the sound is incredibly compressed, a lot of the vocals are harsh and quite raw. At about a minute the mix falls apart completely and not even the heavy buss compression gives it any cohesion.

In the future, use reference tracks and try to create a cohesive sound stage. The stereo image is quite jarring with the electronic percussion and unbalanced.

I do hear potential though, keep working.