Hi!
Just a few ideas that I had upon listening to your mix:
- A couple things appear to be missing such as some of the higher frequencies in your mix. Also missing is a chunk of lyrics, and I don't think anything interesting has been added to that section instead.
- The effects on the vocals during the second verse are creative but they make me think of psychedelic rock or darker alternative songs.
- I can appreciate the time and effort you must have spent doing deep cuts and edits to the arrangement, and I really like some of the ideas here! I think that overall your mix could benefit by adding more of your creative ideas to the song sections and instruments you have been building.
Hope something here is helpful!
Eastwood
Just a few ideas that I had upon listening to your mix:
- A couple things appear to be missing such as some of the higher frequencies in your mix. Also missing is a chunk of lyrics, and I don't think anything interesting has been added to that section instead.
- The effects on the vocals during the second verse are creative but they make me think of psychedelic rock or darker alternative songs.
- I can appreciate the time and effort you must have spent doing deep cuts and edits to the arrangement, and I really like some of the ideas here! I think that overall your mix could benefit by adding more of your creative ideas to the song sections and instruments you have been building.
Hope something here is helpful!
Eastwood
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