04-01-2019, 12:52 PM
Nice job overall. The drums sound a bit muffled, perhaps. Lead vocal sounds good, although wouldn't do any harm to clean up the plosives and 's' sounds a bit. The big issue for me though, is the bass guitar - it's almost completely inaudible (I had to listen again on headphones just to make sure!), which kind of makes the whole thing fall apart a bit.