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Perpetual Escape: 'Stop And Rise'
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Not a bad start at all! I think the Vox are a little quiet in the first verse. And I think you can get a better energy from section to section. You seem to lose a bit going into the chorus.

I think your overall tones are good! Maybe your kick is a bit subby, and I think the bridge section needs some work to get some energy from that as well. I used the "creative use of the mute button" on the acoustic solo during the bridge. It just didn't seem to add to the song.

You have a really nice framework, but keep going!
Draper
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RE: Perpetual Escape: 'Stop And Rise' - by loweche6 - 01-03-2018, 08:31 AM