09-12-2016, 04:22 AM
Overall, i really like balance that you've developed in your mix. The bass is in charge, as it should be in a funky go getting song like this. You've also got some nice width out of the two main guitars which means that there is plenty of room for solos (slide, organ, guitar.....OMG its like being back in the 70's 
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A couple of things worth mentioning. Your snare doesn't cut through clearly at all times. The raw snare tracks are out of phase so make sure that you flip the phase on one of these tracks. If you've done that already then you'll need to eq the balance to make sure you have enough thud, attack and air.
Secondly, watch out for those Funky consonants on the vocals - they're pretty audible and need controlling.
Good work.....Keep it up.
cheers, Simon
).A couple of things worth mentioning. Your snare doesn't cut through clearly at all times. The raw snare tracks are out of phase so make sure that you flip the phase on one of these tracks. If you've done that already then you'll need to eq the balance to make sure you have enough thud, attack and air.
Secondly, watch out for those Funky consonants on the vocals - they're pretty audible and need controlling.
Good work.....Keep it up.
cheers, Simon
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