Hi,yes the snare is miles too loud here,and maybe the lead guitar a tad but not a bad ballance you have going here .
The acoustic panning could be better but that all comes with practice and i think you have some strange delay going on in there
With the acoustics somewhere.Try just nudging one track forward till you have got the hang of using delay as i also notice you have tried using it on the womans vocal too and its a bit all over the shop so just put a little reverb on the vocs and have a read up up on vocal delay etc.You should buy Mikes book it is very very good for everything you will ever need to know
The acoustic panning could be better but that all comes with practice and i think you have some strange delay going on in there
With the acoustics somewhere.Try just nudging one track forward till you have got the hang of using delay as i also notice you have tried using it on the womans vocal too and its a bit all over the shop so just put a little reverb on the vocs and have a read up up on vocal delay etc.You should buy Mikes book it is very very good for everything you will ever need to know