23-04-2016, 08:46 PM
I think overall that's a good one.
A few things could possibly be better, IMHO:
- the snare is overly snappy, and I'm missing some of the ghost notes that make the groove, so I would back off the compressor on that, or use a longer attack to let it breathe a bit
- the vocal level is good, but it's quite in your face, I wonder if a bit of reverb/delay would not help it sit more with the band?
- the bgvs are a little lost ATM.
- the fade out is a little abrupt, I would give it a few more seconds
That's just nitpicks of course, because I think all in all, you did a good job!
A few things could possibly be better, IMHO:
- the snare is overly snappy, and I'm missing some of the ghost notes that make the groove, so I would back off the compressor on that, or use a longer attack to let it breathe a bit
- the vocal level is good, but it's quite in your face, I wonder if a bit of reverb/delay would not help it sit more with the band?
- the bgvs are a little lost ATM.
- the fade out is a little abrupt, I would give it a few more seconds
That's just nitpicks of course, because I think all in all, you did a good job!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here