02-09-2016, 03:53 PM
You did a great job, keep going. The trill guitar far right is a distraction. Try it closer to center but in back with reverb or delay and some eq. Get a mental picture of everyone playing and then just pan them to match the picture in your mind. This will help make a lot of decisions easier as far as pan and reverb, eq, etc.
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