I think there is too much sizzle in the upper frequency range of the lead vocal, and maybe add back just a little bit of bottom, but I would not call it "painfully thin". It sounds pretty close to "right" IMO, just needs some small tweaks.
I also think there is enough bass in terms of volume, but the balance between kick and bass may need some more work. Not much, maybe make them a little tighter.
Overall I think this mix is a good start that just needs some work on the details.
I also think there is enough bass in terms of volume, but the balance between kick and bass may need some more work. Not much, maybe make them a little tighter.
Overall I think this mix is a good start that just needs some work on the details.