09-07-2020, 10:49 AM
Good mix. It has the doomy vibe of the original, which is something most mixes on this platform don't have. I think the vocals are too wet in the verse, and they sound way better and more intimate when they are very close, upfront and "in your face". That's also true for the rhythm guitars.
Overall you did a pretty good job in giving each new piece of this giant sonic puzzle a place to shine and made a ton of tasteful mix decisions. The blast sounds like it's played by a human and not by a machine gun (little know fact: Kevin Talley from Suffocation/Battlecross/Dying Fetus is the drummer on this recording). The solo at the end sounds epic. The vocals are catchy and powerful.
My critique: The original mix has more weight (=bass) too it, and the vocals don't stand out that much while still having enough grit and power. Overall there could be more separation between the instruments (the kick is hard to hear in the last part of the verse), and the guitars should sound wider and need to come up quite a bit. That would be the points I would ask you to fix if you were our mixer for this project
Overall you did a pretty good job in giving each new piece of this giant sonic puzzle a place to shine and made a ton of tasteful mix decisions. The blast sounds like it's played by a human and not by a machine gun (little know fact: Kevin Talley from Suffocation/Battlecross/Dying Fetus is the drummer on this recording). The solo at the end sounds epic. The vocals are catchy and powerful.
My critique: The original mix has more weight (=bass) too it, and the vocals don't stand out that much while still having enough grit and power. Overall there could be more separation between the instruments (the kick is hard to hear in the last part of the verse), and the guitars should sound wider and need to come up quite a bit. That would be the points I would ask you to fix if you were our mixer for this project