26-06-2020, 02:28 AM
I can only give a quick listen. In general everything feels ok. My biggest is the Lead Vocal. It just feels a little weak compared to everything else. It's such a big, grand song but also relatively simple and it feels like the vocal should command it and not get lost no matter what the parts are at the time. It definitely needs some automation.
I'm not a fan of the vocal effect delay, at least at the top where it's more exposed. It's a bit distracting. that might be more of a personal thing.
I feel like maybe the bass guitar could be a little more defined. I'm not sure. I feel it but I wonder it is doing anything interesting melodically underneath everything. I dunno.
Other than that I'm sure there are other tweaks that can be done but nothing is jumping out at me as being off. Maybe the tambourine. That seems like it's sticking out to me but tambs generally bother me.
Hope that helps
I'm not a fan of the vocal effect delay, at least at the top where it's more exposed. It's a bit distracting. that might be more of a personal thing.
I feel like maybe the bass guitar could be a little more defined. I'm not sure. I feel it but I wonder it is doing anything interesting melodically underneath everything. I dunno.
Other than that I'm sure there are other tweaks that can be done but nothing is jumping out at me as being off. Maybe the tambourine. That seems like it's sticking out to me but tambs generally bother me.
Hope that helps
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.