Would really appreciate feedback on this one!

[lm425]

Its a really cool, cinematic approach - I would like a more upfront lead vocal to tell the story, the effect on it I find super weird, if you could simplify and enhance the vocal clarity I think the rest of the mix would really fall into place. There are some spots where the bass feels a bit lacking in low end (1:42). Other than that its pretty solid and has a nice lift at the end!