It's a bit sibilant. It's just that way naturally. But it gets distracting in the ping pong delay. If nothing consider putting a de-esser before the delay or maybe just a filter. I like the louder acoustics but they might be too loud and overpower things. The instrumental break balance feels a bit better. Overall it feels a little distorted, especially by the end when everything is kicking in. Could possibly use more of the background vocals?
Anyway, those are my on the fly notes. It all feels a little 'pushed'. Let it have its space.
Anyway, those are my on the fly notes. It all feels a little 'pushed'. Let it have its space.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.