07-05-2020, 11:41 AM
Hi !
On an overall perspective, I think that all the synths/effects and strings parts could be a little bit behind to let the guitar riffs be more efficient.
Another detail: the first guitar track for the intro is slightly detuned on the original track. Try to compensate it (very small amount to a higher pitch) as the transition to the main riff with the well tuned guitars feels weird.
On the drum parts, I think that the hihat is too present and destabilize a bit the global drum sounds.
On an overall perspective, I think that all the synths/effects and strings parts could be a little bit behind to let the guitar riffs be more efficient.
Another detail: the first guitar track for the intro is slightly detuned on the original track. Try to compensate it (very small amount to a higher pitch) as the transition to the main riff with the well tuned guitars feels weird.
On the drum parts, I think that the hihat is too present and destabilize a bit the global drum sounds.