Dave!
Your version two sounds really cool man! Tons of punch and power! maybe the only think I can think of is maybe adding a little bit of 300 to your bass during the verses? Somwhere in the lower mids. Maybe across the board? the seems to be a little bit of room that I think the bass could occupy. Right now you have a great huge kick sound, with a bass that is warm, but does leave a little something to be desired. With that said, I am not happy with where my bass has landed, but I kept myself to a very strict time constraint.
Also the sub bass from the kick leading into the 1st chorus gets a a little bit too big for its britches, heh.
All in all, a really fine mix with strong imaging, punch, and power.
Really nice work!
Draper
Your version two sounds really cool man! Tons of punch and power! maybe the only think I can think of is maybe adding a little bit of 300 to your bass during the verses? Somwhere in the lower mids. Maybe across the board? the seems to be a little bit of room that I think the bass could occupy. Right now you have a great huge kick sound, with a bass that is warm, but does leave a little something to be desired. With that said, I am not happy with where my bass has landed, but I kept myself to a very strict time constraint.
Also the sub bass from the kick leading into the 1st chorus gets a a little bit too big for its britches, heh.
All in all, a really fine mix with strong imaging, punch, and power.
Really nice work!
Draper