14-11-2019, 10:12 PM
I like the overall experimentation. But it might be a bit much. The vocal feels too far away and disconnected from the listener. It's more another part than a focal point. I think when things get this effected and atmospheric you need an element or two to 'ground' the scene. This mix a kind of Alice in Wonderland without Alice. I like the dynamics of the chorus but it's a bit bright. More the first chorus than the second.
There's a lot of cool ideas but it might be too incoherent.
Hope that helps.
There's a lot of cool ideas but it might be too incoherent.
Hope that helps.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.